要求:结合材料,自选角度,确定立意;切合身份,贴合背景;符合文体特征;不要套作,不得抄袭;不得泄露个人信息;不少于800字。
Д№ЃКбЇЩњбЙСІгЂгязїЮФЦЊ1ЃКPressures on College Students As we all know, pressure is a major character of our modern life .It is so natural that we have no way to avoid it but to accept 。
【押题理由】
Д№ЃКЙигкЛКНтбЙСІЕФгЂгязїЮФЦЊ1 Because of the high developing speed of the world, pressure has become a serious problem in nowadays. As our students, we also have to face with much pressure。
紧扣社会热点,客观呈现社会生活状态,从而有效引导考生关注现实生活,思考现实问题,这是近年来高考命题的基本原则和方向。本题引导青年学生正确认识“快与慢”的关系,深刻思考人生的存在方式和存在价值,更注重对考生的理性思辨能力和批判意识的考查。
Д№ЃКLearning a new language is never easy, added onto our everyday stress; it may become very harmful for our health. There are several causes for stress in learning English。
【佳作呈现】
Д№ЃКFirst of all,the gradution exam is coming second ,the parents give much expectation on me ,they hope me to be admited into a good high school .However。
生活之美,以心品味
——写给表哥的一封信
Д№ЃКyou may do a better job on your report if the anxiety inspires you to prepare well before you read it to the class.But bad stress can happen if the stressful feelings keep going over time。
崇阳一中 A200班黄思瑗
亲爱的表哥:
Д№ЃКyou are required to write within 40 minutes a composition of no less than 200 words about "Stress in Modern Life" (ЯжДњЩњЛюжаЕФбЙСІ)。
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近来可好?上次你同我说起,身处繁华都市之中,常有忙碌焦虑之感。深思之下,我仍想劝你工作虽重要,事物虽繁杂,但应当偶尔停下忙碌的步伐,品味生活之美。
表哥,生活之美,不仅仅是阳春白雪,烹雪为茶,更是青菜豆腐,日常滋味。
抬头仰望,有湛蓝天空、悠悠白云,可仰观宇宙之大,更可俯察品类之盛。生活之美,无处不在。有陶潜“种豆南山下,草盛豆苗稀”,躬身耕作,自得其乐,于生活中寻美处,步履从容,悠然自得。有白居易“几处早莺争暖树,谁家新燕啄春泥”,于沙堤上漫步,眼中之景,所闻几声清啼,皆美,皆动人。他们皆于日常滋味中觅得生活之美。
Д№ЃКаДЙигкбЙСІЕФгЂгязїЮФЦЊ1 Pressure seems to be a natural part in our daily life in this competitive society. Like it or not there is always pressure of one kind or another。
表哥,驻足体味生活之美,你会多几分从容,更多几分灵魂的宁静。
Д№ЃКЛКНтбЙСІгЂгязїЮФЃКNow, the students' learning pressure is great, and after class life is a good medicine to relieve the pressure of learning. I have a very interesting extracurricular life。
在那一条流动的紫藤萝瀑布前,宗璞抬头仰望,离愁哀思亦随之流动。当那皎洁的明月悬在空中,有人凝望着这样的月亮,深感月色朦胧之美,张爱玲这个总爱在夜晚写作的才女,正是因为时常注视中天明月,才会有这泉涌的才思,笔下文字才会柔美动人。望赤日高悬,体味其炽热与奉献;看野草丛生,体味其不屈与抗争,雨后香花露珠亦会有馥郁之香气,春日融雪亦会有日光之和暖。生活之美,驻足观看,一点一滴,皆浸润灵魂,有从容淡雅之馨香。
表哥,生活之美,无需沐浴焚香,窗明几净,而只需拈花轻嗅,闲庭漫步。
当你在路上行走,可能脑内想的正是会议提纲、任务清单,此刻稍稍放下那些“正事”,呼吸,感受空气的清新;行走,感受土地的坚实。观看春日鲜花,夏日绿树,秋日枯叶,冬日白雪。生活中不缺少美,而只缺少发现美的眼睛。而倍速播放,知晓了情节走向,却失去了共情之感,错离了作者原意;匆匆赶到公司,却失去了宁静悠然的思绪;无时无刻不盯着手机,获得了低级的消遣,却错失了生活之中需品味的美。放下不宁的思绪,沉淀一份悠然的宁静,驻足,专注于当下。步伐从容而坚定,这样方可一往无前,享受到生活美学。
生活之美,无处不在,步履从容,静观草长莺飞,三月春盛;行板悠悠,静听风之轻吟,婉转鸟鸣。愿表哥你可以在繁忙的生活中偶尔驻足,专注生活之乐趣,感受生活之美。
Д№ЃКBecause of the high developing speed of the world, pressure has become a serious problem in nowadays. As our students, we also have to face with much pressure, such as the study pressure, exam pressure。
祝你天天开心! 表弟:李华 2021年6月7日
【名师点评】
本文题目为4字相对式,题目亮眼。开篇提出中心观点“工作虽重要,事物虽繁杂,但应当偶尔停下忙碌的步伐,品味生活之美”。接着纵向展开,从“生活之美,不仅仅是阳春白雪,烹雪为茶,更是青菜豆腐,日常滋味”“驻足体味生活之美,你会多几分从容,更多几分灵魂的宁静”“生活之美,无需沐浴焚香,窗明几净,而只需拈花轻嗅,闲庭漫步”等角度进一步论证观点。巧用课内素材,论据丰富。语言整散结合,富有美感,堪称佳作!