各位学霸们好,今天黄老师跟大家来分享一下上周六雅思大作文真题范文和解析,上周考题如下:
2020.12.18真题
Many people like to eat unhealthy food even though they know it’s bad for themself. Why? What effective way can improve people’s healthy eating habits?
It is reported that some of the junk food can result in high cholesterol(高胆固醇) and even heart attack.What is worse,the plastic container of junk food are definitely not environment-friendly。
真题分析
上周考题话题范畴为快餐垃圾食品类(高频!),问题类型为report类型,这类题常见有两种问题形式:
儿童营养学家在研究中还发现,高糖饮食会引起儿童肥胖。高盐饮食也会增加儿童的肾脏负担,并对其心血管系统存在着潜在的不良影响。有些家长抱怨孩子不好好吃饭,担心孩子营养不良,这都与孩子经常食用垃圾小食品有关。
-What are the advantages and disadvantages?
-What are the causes and effects/solutions?
你们知不知道,其实饼干也是垃圾食品,(不含低温烘烤和全麦饼干)它对人体有还有很多危害。比如:食用香精和色素过多对肝脏功能造成负担,而且严重破坏维生素,还有许多人喜欢喝的可乐、雪碧等等,因为含有磷酸、碳酸。
在写这类题的时候,同学们切记不要忘记问题中的复数了,剑桥中明确要求:复数问题必须给出多个论点回答(具体解读请戳黄老师之前的视频:剑桥解读雅思大作文系列),所以无论是优点还是缺点,原因还是解决措施,同学们都需要写至少2个(一般也就写2个),拒绝垃圾食品作文300字小学。
1.油炸食品 此类食品热量高,含有较高的油脂和氧化物质,经常进食易导致肥胖;是导致高脂血症和冠心病的最危险食品。在油炸过程中,往往产生大量的致癌物质。已经有研究表明,常吃油炸食物的人。
同时,垃圾食品的危害英语作文带翻译,对于这道题目,黄老师想强调一下solution,垃圾食品的危害作文800字,也就是解决措施的写法:同学们切记不要把措施写成口号。
✅措施:政府可以对不健康食物价税,用税收补贴健康食物来鼓励人们购买。(下文论点)
❎口号:人们应该多吃健康食物,少吃不健康食物。
从中文来看,垃圾食品对小学生的危害,同学们可以明显的发现,措施是一个可以执行的方案;而口号仅仅只是需要达到的目的和建议。黄老师在批改作业时发现有很多同学在写解决方案是会错误的空喊口号,垃圾食品的危害简短概括,而这是不对的。
学校门口有好几个卖油炸食品的小摊子,妈妈经常告诫我:“那些都是垃圾食品,吃了会影响身体健康,绝不能买。”虽然我嘴上答应,但心里总在想:人家只不过是无证经营而已,你也太小题大做了。直到有一次。
所以,同学们可以参照一下范文中黄老师写的2个措施,同时注意积累范文中的好词好句哦!(所有词句均摘抄借鉴英文期刊杂志报纸,为地道英语搭配可以直接背诵)
满分词汇/高分段落
赵老师说:“大家谈得很好,垃圾食品对人类有害,我们要吃健康的绿色食品。”我想:是呀,有许多儿童就是因为吃了过多的垃圾食品,所以才导致肥胖,疾病的。垃圾食品的危害实在太多了,我们要远离垃圾食品,学会健康饮食。
2020.12.18真题
Many people like to eat unhealthy food even though they know it’s bad for themself. Why? What effective way can improve people’s healthy eating habits?
满分词汇:
(1)营养成分品质较为差 意思是,我们欢欢喜喜地把它填入肚里,结果它不可以充分发挥需有的营养成分功效,例如,要钙没钙,要钾没钾,维他命少得可伶。(2)非常容易令人不经意间中长胖 意思是。
世界卫生组织发布的十大垃圾食品,油炸食品排名第一,烧烤食品紧随其后。油炸食品是导致心血管疾病的元凶(油炸淀粉);它含致癌物质,破坏维生素,使蛋白质变性。而烧烤类食品含大量的“三苯四丙吡”(三大致癌物质之首)。
draw n. 吸引人的地方
on the go 在忙碌中做什么
a sheer number of adj. 大量的
翻译:健康的食物对身体健康有益。我们应该吃些有益於健康的食物。健康的食物包括蔬菜,水果,鱼类,肉类等等。但是我们需要合理饮食,对於某种食物不能过量饮用。我们知道许多学生不喜欢吃学校的午饭,因为它不美味。
accessible adj. 容易接触到的
forgo v. 放弃
1 辣条含有很多的防腐剂、色素,防腐剂吃多了会致癌的,这是大家都知道的常识问题了,科学家们反对添加剂过度也是这个原因了!癌症是很难治愈的一种疾病。
detrimental adj. 有害的
taste bud n. 味蕾
subsidize v. 补贴
daily intake n. 每日摄取量
原因段:
The first reason is that junk food and fast-food products are generally easy to grab and take with people. This ease is a major draw for many,especially people who work long hours or need to grab a snack on the go. The rapid production and easy storage are major reasons why a sheer number of people eat junk food. In addition,cost is a massive component of the draw to junk food,垃圾食品的利弊英语作文,which tends to be extremely cheap. In fact,it normally costs several times as much to have a healthful diet as it does to eat junk food and fast-food products. When junk food is highly accessible,affordable and convenient,垃圾食品的危害作文六百字,it becomes easy to forgo nutritious food. Finally,such food is tasty: although the high sodium and sugar content are detrimental for consumers,they make these foods appealing to the taste buds.
解决段:
In order to promote a healthy diet,government can increase tax for junk food industry and use these revenues to subsidize healthy food,which will reduce the price for healthy food and hence increase its attractiveness,especially for households with tight budget on food. For individuals,吃垃圾食品的坏处作文,creating a list which tracks daily eating and drinking intake is highly recommended. It is easily achieved today with varies mobile applications allowing users to upload the food they ate in a day and automatically generating a daily sum of nutrition and calories,which helps them to uncover their unhealthy diet habits.