爱吃辣的加拿大大叔雅思托福10多年一线教学中文说得还不错，我自己英语作文50字带翻译，头像是他家的橘猫在这里分享他原创的雅思大作文和小作文范文每篇范文都有配音，在他的公众号“英语考试Cat”
你好呀！我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。今天我给大家带来12月25日大陆雅思考试大作文的范文。老规矩，以下是正文目录：
1，题目
2，审题
3，高分范文
4，范文朗读
5，描述我自己作文英文，范文地道词汇中英对照，包括：
题目改写
观点类大作文高分句型
展示“词汇丰富度”的词汇&短语
展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇&句型
上题：
Some people believe that university students should pay all the cost of studies because university education only benefits students themselves，not the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
审题：
Type: Opinion (disagree)
Body 1: the premise of the opinion is false—graduates are not detached from society
Body 2: graduates have an impact on society by way of job and their mentality
To introduce myself(介绍我自己)Hello,every one!(大家好)My name is *** . (我叫***)I'm a 15 years old boy. (我是一个15岁的男孩)(具体情况自己改)I live in the beautiful city of Rizhao。
Key words: should / pay ALL the cost / only
女孩们坐在公园里学习Girls sitting in the park and learning
- Model Answer 高分范文 & 范文朗读 -
▲范文音频戳这里▲
There are those that think students enrolling in university should bear the expense，as they believe that having a tertiary academic education solely profits the individual，and not society，an opinion I disagree with for the following reasons.
The sole reason for the argument that students should pay the whole cost of their university education rests on the premise that the graduate will not have a beneficial effect on the society in which they live. This premise，介绍自己英语作文50字带翻译，however，is demonstrably false，as that would require a belief that the individual is detached from society in all ways，including work，finance，and their mentality，which is clearly not the case. Thus，their university experience，the knowledge they learn，and the economic benefit they may reap from being educated，must，in some way，translate as having an influence on society，one that is hopefully beneficial.
These benefits regard a university graduate’s career on the one hand，and the evolutionary development of a person’s attitudes and behavior on the other. If it were not for engineering degrees，for example，society would not benefit from the bridges，tunnels，and infrastructure that safely serve the community. Furthermore，since a graduate has their mind shaped by passing through the rigors of university，they inevitably grow into a more civilized person，characteristics of which are often transmitted to the larger society. Unquestionably，therefore，university not only benefits the individual in the way of personal growth and finances，but it also has a constructive impact on their respective society，and as such，a portion of their study expenses should be paid by the state.
In conclusion，there is no doubt that graduating from a higher education institute can be of immense value to the individual both mentally and financially; however，in my opinion，it is clear that society is also advantageously affected by this university experience，and subsequently，the state should have some responsibility to help pay for a student’s tuition costs.
- Essay Analysis 范文解析 -
- (1) Introduction -
Paraphrasing from the Statement/Question 题目改写：
Some people = There are those that think
university students = students enrolling in university
pay all the cost = bear the expense
because = ，as
university education = having a tertiary academic education
only benefits = solely profits
students themselves = the individual
Standard Phrase for the “Opinion” type essay 观点类大作文通用句型：
There are those that think
，an opinion I disagree with for the following reason
Words showing Cohesion (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：
，as
they
一、My name is Tina.I am a ten-year-old girl.I am in the elementary school.I have long hair.And I have big eyes.I am of medium build and a little thin.I am quite and I like doing sports。
that
，and
，an (By following a noun，or noun phrase，with a comma and then ‘a’ (an)，我自己的英语作文50字，allows us to further identify the noun (noun phrase). This is an ‘appositive phrase’ ……名词，a/an ....，这个结构叫做“同位语”
上个学期，我英语很差，现在我学得比以前好多了，我非常喜欢它。并且我所有的科目都比以前好多了。我过去常常喜欢打篮球，特别是像堆雪人之类的事，我想将来当一名教师，因此，我必须从现在开始努力学习以取得好成绩。
Vocabulary 高分地道词汇和短语：
enrolling 注册；入学
bear 承受
tertiary education 高等教育
academic 学院的；学术的
- (2) Body 1 -
Aspects that must be referred to 这一段需要提的点：
University students should pay all the cost (I disagree) of studies because university education only benefits students themselves，not the society 大学生需要自付学费(我不同意这个观点)，因为大学教育的受益者是他们自己，不是社会
Standard IELTS essay phrase 通用句型：
The sole reason for the argument
rests on the premise that
Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道词汇和短语：
rests on the premise 以……为前提
demonstrably 明确地
detached from 脱离
mentality 心智；思想
clearly not the case 不是这么回事儿
reap from 收获；收割
translate as having 意味着；转化为
Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words，conjunctions，relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：
that
their
the
in which they
This
，however。
，as that
that the
，我自己英语作文带翻译，including
，which is
Thus，their
they
，and
，in some way
，one that
- (3) Body 2 -
你好！我的名字叫就xx。我的英文名字叫快乐。我14岁。我是一个快乐的女孩。我有一个幸福的家庭。我的父亲和母亲都是上班族。他们很忙。但是在周末，他们经常煮好吃的给我。在家庭中我很高兴。我爱我的父母。
大家早上好！感谢您在百忙之中抽出时间。非常荣幸有机会参加本次面试。下面我简单介绍一下我自己。My name is ***. I am 23 years old and born in Qingdao。
Aspects that must be referred to 这一段需要提的点：
University students should pay all the cost (I disagree) of studies because university education only benefits students themselves，not the society 大学生需要自付学费(我不同意这个观点)，因为大学教育的受益者是他们自己，不是社会
Standard IELTS essay phrase 通用句型：
These
Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道词汇和短语：
evolutionary development of ……的进化发展；不断发育
infrastructure 基础设施
mind shaped by 认知塑造
passing through 经过；经历
the rigors of 严格；严谨
inevitably 不可避免地
civilized 文明的
transmitted to 传送；传输
the larger society 广大社会
unquestionably 无疑；毫无疑问地
a constructive impact on 对……有建设性的影响
respective 各自的；分别的
Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words，conjunctions，relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：
These
benefits
regards
，on the one hand，and……….on the other.
If it
，for example。
Furthermore，since
，they
，characteristics of which
，therefore，一篇关于自己的英语作文。
in the way of
，but it also
their
To introduce myself（介绍我自己）Hello,every one!（大家好）My name is *** . （我叫***）I'm a 15 years old boy. （我是一个15岁的男孩）（具体情况自己改）I live in the beautiful city of Rizhao。
，and as such。
，a
- (4) Conclusion -
Standard IELTS essay phrase 通用句型：
In conclusion。
There is no doubt that
，英语作文写我自己5句，in my opinion
Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道词汇和短语：
a higher education institute 高等教育机构
immense value 庞大的价值
mentally and financially 心智上和经济上
advantageously affected by 对……有益
Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words，conjunctions，relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：
both
; however。
，我自己英语作文70词，it
Also
This
，and subsequently。
祝各位早日和雅思分手，加油！
