Writing
【剖析】
本单元话题是“教室里的物品”,围绕确认物品所属关系而展开。命题人通常设置为某一物品写一则寻物启事或失物招领启事。此类作文属于应用文体裁,实用性很强,时态以一般现在时为主,初一寻物启事英语作文。写作时,首先题目要写正确——“寻物启事”为Lost,“失物招领启事”为Found,然后写明物品名称及其特征,最后应提供联系人及其联系方式,英语作文寻物启事50字。此类话题作文吸引阅卷人眼球的亮点表达有:
(1) Is this ..? / Are these ...?
(2)I lost ...
(3)Call sb. at ...
【典例】
课本3b:Write your own lost or found notice with your name and phone number. (写一则你自己的寻物启事或失物招领启事,加上你的名字和电话号码。)
1.审题指导(把握中心,得方向分)
阅读写作内容和要求,获取以下信息:
1)注意先审题确定是Lost还是Found。
你非常着急。 请你根据以上 提示,用英语写出一则60词左右的寻物启事。 寻物启事的英语作文 篇6 I lost my notebook in the library this afternoon. Its cover is blue and white. 今天下午,我在图书馆弄丢了我的笔记本。
2)描述物品时抓住主要特征,要细致具体,寻物启事英文30字。
3)写清楚联系人及联系方式,英语寻物启示作文标题。
Lost I lost my wallet with carelessness on my way to school this morning. Inside there is some money, IP card and a monthly ticket. Will the finder please send it to No。
4)注意使用礼貌用语。
Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldcontactme.译文:寻物启事可以写成:各位同学大家好,今天上午因本人不慎将一把粉红色雨伞落在学校足球场。望捡到同学与本人联系,不胜感激。
2.写作技巧(学会方法,巧得高分)
“三要素法”写招领/寻物启事类作文
指what(物品),lost寻物启事英语作文,features(特点),contact ways(联系方式)
I lost my wallet with carelessness on my way to school this morning. Inside there is some money, IP card and a monthly ticket. Will the finder please send it to No. 11 Middle School or telephone me?
3.写作模板(学会套路,得基本分)
(1)寻物启事 Lost
Lost:
What(所丢物品)
I lost my notebook in the library this afternoon. Its cover is blue and white. I wrote my name on the first paper. There are about two hundred papers。
features(特点及里面有什么)
contact ways(联系方式:phone number电话号码, E-mail address 邮箱地址)
Lost and found
(2)招领启事 Found
Found:
What(所捡物品)
features(特点及在何处捡到的)
contact ways(联系方式:phone number电话号码, E-mail address 邮箱地址)
4.经典词句(妙用句式,得出彩分)
单词:lost,found,yours
短语:in the library 在图书馆里
I lost my notebook in the library this afternoon. Its cover is blue and white.今天下午,我在图书馆弄丢了我的笔记本,封面时蓝白色的。I wrote my name on the first paper.第一页上写了我的名字。
句子:
1、篇一 l lost my notebook in the library this afternoon. Its cover is blue and white. l wrote myname on the first paper. There are about two hundred papers。
a. I found... 我捡到。。。
b. Is the .... yours? 。,寻物启事英语作文40词带翻译。。是你的吗?
c. Call ... at ....
5.范文赏析(书写工整,得印象分)
Found
I found a schoolbag in the library. It's yellow. Some books and a pencil box are in it. Is the
I lost my wallet on my way to school this morning. There is some money, a monthly ticket and something else in it. I wish the finder would return it to me soon. Will the finder please come toNo.
schoolbag yours? Call Mr. Green at 227-3421.
名师点评:
本文运用了“三要素法”写招领启事。物品名称(要素一):a schoolbag;物品特点及发现地点(要素二):in the library;联系方式(要素三) :Call Mr. Green at 227-3421. 行文简洁流畅。
句子 Is the schoolbag yours?和短语 call ... at .... 的运用,使句型丰富,语言准确、恰当。
“寻物启事”的英文:Lost and Found Found 读法 英 [faʊnd] 美 [faʊnd]1、vt. 创立,建立;创办 2、v. 找到(find的过去分词)短语。
小试牛刀:
话题:Jack丢了一只红色的钢笔,寻物启事英语作文60词,他很想找到这支钢笔,他的电话号码是255-3488.请帮他写一份寻物启事,不少于4句话。
要求:1.用第一人称来写。2.语言简练,表达明确。
分析:寻物启事
1.明确题目,表达目的------------- Lost
2.描述失物,提供联系方式------------- I lost a/an 物品名称. Please call me at 电话号码.
寻物启事英语范文一:I losted my blue notebook yesterday,it's necessary for me.So I whish he/she would be kind enough to return it to me as soon as possible.I will be very grateful!My name's Jim。
3.文末落款,点名失主------------- Jack
范文:
Lost:
I lost a red pen. It's new. I must find it. Please call me at 255-3488. Thank you very much.
Jack
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