English composition writing
【剖析】
本单元以“家庭”为话题，主要围绕介绍家人而展开。写作时首先要理清人物之间的关系，其次要注意语言表达准确、有条理，主谓搭配一致，用英语介绍自己的家人80字。写此类话题作文多用第一人称，时态为一般现在时，英语作文我的家人带翻译50字，行文中注意对家庭成员的称呼，介绍家人的英语作文50字带翻译。此类话题作文吸引阅卷人眼球的亮点表达有：
(1) Here is a photo of my family.
一篇介绍我的家人英语作文5句话左右的范文：my family There are four people in my family:my grandfa,my father,my mother and me.My grandfa is seventy years old this year.He treats me very well。
(2)This/That is ...
(3)These/Those are ...
(4)He/She is ..…
(5)They are ...
作文如下：My FamilyI.我的家人。have a happy family.There are five people in my family.They are my parents，my grandparents，my sister，and I.有一个幸福的家庭。我家有五口人。
【典例】
课本3b：Bring a family photo to class and write about it.(带一张家庭照片到班里，并根据照片写一段介绍。)
1.审题指导（把握中心，得方向分）
1）明确写作目的是介绍照片中的人物。
2）介绍的先后顺序是什么？
3）用哪些句式结构介绍？
4）时态要用一般现在时，用一段英文介绍自己的家人，人称要用第一人称和第三人称。
作文如下：This is my family. There are four people in my family. My grandmother, my father, my mother and me.这是我的家人。我家有四口人。我的祖母、父亲、母亲和我。My grandmother has short white hair。
My family 我的家庭 There are four people in my family.我家里有四口人.my parents,my grandmother and me.我父母,我奶奶和我.My family is a warm and happy.我的家庭很温馨和幸福.I’m good at sports 。
2.写作技巧（学会方法，巧得高分）
“三步法”介绍照片中的家庭成员
第一步：总体介绍是什么照片。
翻译：我家有四口人，我爸爸、我妈妈、我姐姐和我。我爸爸是一名工人。他在一家工厂工作。我妈妈是一名医生。她很忙。她每天乘公共汽车去医院。我姐姐是六年级的学生，我也是一名小学生。我是四年级。我爱我的家人。
来自学员“介绍家人”的英语作文分享：I have a big family. There are five people in my family, my grandmother, my parents and my elderly brother. My grandmother is easygoing。
第二步：分别介绍家庭成员，3一5句英语介绍家人。
介绍家人 Introduction of family 全学段 82字 Dear Tom, Here is a photo of my family. There are four people in my family. The tall man is my father. He's a doctor。
第三步：表达情感。
3.写作模板（学会套路，得基本分）
模板
4.经典词句（妙用句式，得出彩分）
单词：photo，these，parents，我的家人英语作文，grandfather，grandmother，girl，sister，brother。
uncle，aunt，cousin，they，love
短语：a photo of，the little boy
句子：Here is a photo of ......
These/Those are my ......
The tall man is ......
您好，很高兴为您解My parents are obedient. They take good care of my grandparents. They often help my grandparents with the family chores to make them live better. On weekends。
I love my family.
介绍家人的英语作文：I have a happy family. There are four people in it. They are my father, my mother, my brother and I .My father is a doctor and my mother is a teacher。
5.范文赏析（书写工整，得印象分）
Hi. I&39;s me. I love my family and they love me，too.
正文：I live in a family of four with my grandmother. My father. My mother and I are made up. My home is also full of frustration.我生活在一个四口之家里。
名师点评：
本文运用了“三步法”介绍照片中的家庭成员。先引出话题：Hi. I'm Bill. Here is a photo of my family( 第1-3句)；再介绍家庭成员（第4-13句)；最后表达情感：I love my family and they love me，too.(最后一句)用词准确，情感真挚。指示代词This/That/These/Those及The girl，The boy的运用，使人物介绍清楚明确，行文流畅。
family！
Taking nothing for granted. Know that the harder you work，the luckier you'll get.
没有什么事情是理所当然，要知道越努力越幸运。
Fighting！
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