English composition writing
【剖析】
my parents will teach me to finish my homework and then we will watch TV together. At weekend, usually we will go out for family activity. I love my family.我出世在一个普通而温馨的家庭。
本单元以“家庭”为话题，主要围绕介绍家人而展开。写作时首先要理清人物之间的关系，其次要注意语言表达准确、有条理，主谓搭配一致。写此类话题作文多用第一人称，i love my family作文初一，时态为一般现在时，行文中注意对家庭成员的称呼。此类话题作文吸引阅卷人眼球的亮点表达有：
(1) Here is a photo of my family.
parents I always get good grades in the study. I’m on good terms with my parents and my sister. I am lucky to have been born in such a good family. I love my family very much.要学会自己阅读英语。
(2)This/That is ...
(3)These/Those are ...
(4)He/She is ..…
(5)They are ...
【典例】
课本3b：Bring a family photo to class and write about it.(带一张家庭照片到班里，并根据照片写一段介绍。)
love my family英语作文：I love my family I have a happy family. I love my family very much. There are four people in my family：my father, my mother ,my brother and I。
1.审题指导（把握中心，得方向分）
1）明确写作目的是介绍照片中的人物。
I love my family I live in a poor but happy family.我住在一个贫穷但快乐的家庭。My family member are my mom, my day, my grandmom and my elder brother.我的家庭成员是我妈，我爸，我奶奶和我哥哥。
2）介绍的先后顺序是什么？
3）用哪些句式结构介绍？
4）时态要用一般现在时，人称要用第一人称和第三人称。
I love my family there are many reasons, the main reason is that my parents and family environment. "Soon fell in love" This is, indeed, that all right, whether it is still the same people dead。
2.写作技巧（学会方法，巧得高分）
“三步法”介绍照片中的家庭成员
第一步：总体介绍是什么照片。
第二步：分别介绍家庭成员。
第三步：表达情感，i love my family初中作文。
I am good at playing the piano , My favorite pet is dogs. I like eating meat. So , I am a little fat. I love my family. We’re all very happy.【第6篇】This is my family menu. I have some bread。
3.写作模板（学会套路，得基本分）
模板
4.经典词句（妙用句式，得出彩分）
单词：photo，these，parents，i love my family英语作文80词，grandfather，我爱我家英语作文50字带翻译，grandmother，girl，i love my family英语作文带翻译，sister，brother。
uncle，aunt，cousin，they，love
短语：a photo of，ilovefamily作文40字，the little boy
句子：Here is a photo of ......
These/Those are my ......
family and I love my family a lot,they work in the same hospital.Michael is my twin brother,my mother，但不在同一个班，我们全家经常开车去公园吃野餐，大家好。
In the future，I will be a doctor. And I will help people all over the world. Children won，t go to school.将来，我将成为一名医生。我会帮助全世界的人。孩子们不会去上学。
love my family 我爱我家我有一个幸福的家庭。我妈妈是高中语文老师的她把自行车转到 seven',mother。他的工作很难.I am a student。他们有六间屋子.In the afternoon.After class。
The tall man is ......
I love my family.
5.范文赏析（书写工整，得印象分）
love my family 我爱我家我有一个幸福的家庭。我妈妈是高中语文老师的她把自行车转到 seven',mother。他的工作很难.I am a student。他们有六间屋子.In the afternoon.After class。
Hi. I&39;s me. I love my family and they love me，too.
名师点评：
本文运用了“三步法”介绍照片中的家庭成员。先引出话题：Hi. I'm Bill. Here is a photo of my family( 第1-3句)；再介绍家庭成员（第4-13句)；最后表达情感：I love my family and they love me，too.(最后一句)用词准确，情感真挚。指示代词This/That/These/Those及The girl，The boy的运用，使人物介绍清楚明确，行文流畅。
family！
Taking nothing for granted. Know that the harder you work，the luckier you'll get.
没有什么事情是理所当然，要知道越努力越幸运。
Fighting！
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