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你好呀,我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。今天,给大家带来一个雅思大作文真题(2019年10月,大陆真题)的范文。
老规矩,以下是正文目录:
1,题目
2,审题
3,高分范文
teacher in the future, I will take it as my lifelong career, and strive to be an excellent backbone kindergarten teacher.如果我在未来成为了幼师,那我将把它作为我一生的职业,并努力做一个优秀的骨干幼师。
4,范文朗读
5,范文地道词汇中英对照,包括:
题目改述
报告类大作文高分句型
展示“词汇丰富度”的词汇&短语
展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇&句型
上题:
The world of work is changing rapidly. Working conditions today are not the same as before and people no longer rely on holding one job for life. Discuss the possible causes for these changes and give your suggestion on how people should prepare for work in the future?
审题:
Type: Report Style 报告类大作文 (cause and solution 原因&解决方案)
Body 1: Causes — modern technology and loss of ‘iron rice bowl jobs’
Body 2: Solutions — learn new skill sets/learn coding
Key Phrases: the possible causes/how people should prepare
- Model Answer 高分范文 & 范文朗读 -
▲范文音频戳这里▲
The nature of work is seeing tumultuous change,causing people to face the prospect of having more than just one job within one's lifetime. This essay shall explore the reasons for this change,along with detailing possible methods of how the workforce should prepare for the future job market.
One of the clearest causes for the change in working environments is the manifestation of automation. With the advent of computers combined with high-tech machinery,many manufacturing jobs have disappeared,and this trend is set to continue,whereby almost all manufacturing jobs in the future will be handled by computerized technology. Robotics in vehicle production is a vivid example of this automated manufacturing. Another factor in the disappearance of ‘iron rice bowl jobs’ is the fluidity in economics and how companies these days follow the trend of the economy,by either quickly expanding,or conversely,downsizing or even going bankrupt,all of which leads to a relatively unstable job market.
Given this fluidity within the job market,it is clear that people need to consider their skillset. In other words,having just one skill or expertise no longer guarantees a person the same job or even the same career for life,职业规划英语作文100字,and as such,they should consider widening their range of skills through both experience and training. In line with this,and in conjunction with the modern digital age,the workforce,even in the most basic of jobs,will have to become computer savvy. Being able to code,for example,我的未来职业规划英语作文,is almost a prerequisite for any type of office job,a skill university graduates are already expected to have.
In conclusion,our world has seen incredible technological innovations over the last couple of decades,and with the evolution of the digital age continuing unabated,it is evident that those who do not have the skill sets required within this modern era will inevitably be left behind.
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- Essay Analysis 范文解析 -
作文如下。First of all, we should evaluate ourselves, mainly to evaluate our knowledge and ability, and understand our level.Second, we should evaluate the social environment。
- (1) Introduction
The nature of work is seeing tumultuous change,causing people to face the prospect of having more than just one job within one's lifetime. This essay shall explore the reasons for this change,along with detailing possible methods of how the workforce should prepare for the future job market.
Paraphrasing from the Statement/Question 题目改述:
The world of work = the nature of work
is changing rapidly = is seeing tumultuous change
no longer rely on = face the prospect of
holding one job for life = a single job within one’s lifetime
causes = reasons
for work in the future = the future job market
Standard Phrase for the “Report” type essay 报告类大作文高分句型:
写作思路:通过条目写出自己的优缺点,然后写出自己对于未来职业的计划。正文:I'm active and diligent. I'll do whatever I think I should do, no matter how much trouble I have。
This essay shall explore the reasons for this change,简短英文的职业规划。
,along with detailing possible methods of how
Words showing Cohesion (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语:
,causing
to
more than
just
one’s
This
,along with
Vocabulary 高分地道词汇和短语:
写作思路:把自己的职业规划写下来,比如自己想干什么,想过怎么的生活。I earnestly hope to lead a healthy and prosperous life in the future。 Judging from my aptitude inclination and personality streaks。
the nature of work 工作的性质
tumultuous 动荡的;多变的 (involving a lot of change)
face the prospect of 面临……的前景
the workforce 劳动人口;劳动力
job market 就业市场
- (2) Body 1 -
Aspects that must be referred to 这段需要提到:
What are the possible causes? 这一现象出现的原因
One of the clearest causes for the change in working environments is the manifestation of automation. With the advent of computers combined with high-tech machinery,many manufacturing jobs have disappeared,and this trend is set to continue,whereby almost all manufacturing jobs in the future will be handled by computerized technology. Robotics in vehicle production is a vivid example of this automated manufacturing. Another factor in the disappearance of ‘iron rice bowl jobs’ is the fluidity in economics and how companies these days follow the trend of the economy,by either quickly expanding,or conversely,downsizing or even going bankrupt,all of which leads to a relatively unstable job market.
Standard IELTS essay phrase 雅思高频句型:
One of the clearest causes for…is that
Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道词汇和短语:
the manifestation of 出现;体现
automation 自动化
with the advent of 随着……的出现
high-tech machinery 高科技机器
manufacturing jobs 制造业的工作
this trend is set to continue 这个趋势会持续
computerized technology 计算科技
robotics 机器人
vehicle production 汽车生产
我的职业生涯规划为题目的英文作文:During my high school years,I have found chemistry,physics,and mathematics interesting. Actually,I am interested in many subjects such as biology,history,geography,Chinese。
vivid 生动的
automated manufacturing 自动化生产
the disappearance of ……的消失
‘iron rice bowl jobs’ 铁饭碗
the fluidity in 流动性;不稳定性
economics 经济
follow the trend of 跟随潮流
the economy 经济
downsizing 缩减
going bankrupt 破产
Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words,职业规划相关准备英语作文,conjunctions,relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语:
is the
With the
combined with
,many
,and this
,大学生职业规划英语作文,whereby almost all
will be
handled by
a vivid example of
this
Another factor
and how
I would teach the students my own way of english learning,show the outside world to them,and introduce new ideas to them,so as to broaden their horizons. 我的职业生涯,我planningTalking已经计划。
,by either…,or conversely,…
or even
,all of which leads to
- (3) Body 2 -
Aspects that must be referred to 这段需要提到:
Solutions: learn new skill sets 解决方案:学习新技能
Given this fluidity within the job market,职业规划专题活动英语作文,it is clear that people need to consider their skillset. In other words,having just one skill or expertise no longer guarantees a person the same job or even the same career for life,and as such,they should consider widening their range of skills through both experience and training. In line with this,and in conjunction with the modern digital age,the workforce,even in the most basic of jobs,will have to become computer-savvy. Being able to code,介绍自己的职业规划英语作文,for example,is almost a prerequisite for any type of office job,a skill university graduates are already expected to have.
Standard IELTS essay phrase 雅思高频句型:
Given this…,it
Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道词汇和短语:
expertise 专长
no longer guarantees 再也不能保证
career for life 终生职业
widening 拓宽
range of skills 技能组合
the modern digital age 现代数字时代
the workforce 劳动力
computer-savvy 电脑通
to code 编程
a prerequisite 前提
Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words,职业规划演讲比赛英语作文,conjunctions,relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语:
this
within
,it is clear that
their
In other words。
,having
1、在职业发展过程中,我们规划自己职业的时候除了考虑自身的条件,也必须考虑到职业对自己人生观、世界观的影响。因为有些影响甚至是消极的商务英语专业职业规划范文文章商务英语专业职业规划范文出自http://www.gkstk.com/article/wk-
,and as such。
,they
through both
In line with this。
,and in conjunction with…。
,even in the most basic of…。
,will have to become
Being able to
,for example。
,a
- (4) Conclusion -
In conclusion,our world has seen incredible technological innovations over the last couple of decades,and with the evolution of the digital age continuing unabated,it is evident that those who do not have the skill sets required within this modern era will inevitably be left behind.
Standard IELTS essay phrase 雅思高频句型:
In conclusion。
Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道词汇和短语:
incredible technological innovations 不可思议的科技创新
the evolution of 发展;进化
continuing unabated 日渐重要;有增无减;丝毫没有减弱
evident 明显的
我计划未来做一名老师的的英语作文如下。My plan is to be a teacher in the future, although the teacher's salary is not high compared with other industries. However, the teacher has good welfare。
modern era 现代的时代
inevitably be left behind 不可避免地落伍
Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words,conjunctions,relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语:
over the last couple of decades
,and with
,it is
that those who
within this
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