上海中考英语145（助力高中）免费助力上海学生中考英语达成145分以上，以勤俭节约为题的英语作文，重点突破与达成以下目标：
1.听说测试达到满分（复述与表达）。
2. 写作达到A档18分以上
写作思路：根据节约粮食为主题，以国际粮食和人口情况为基调展开对节约粮食的意义来描写。范文：Whenever we saw in the trash only had one bite of bread，she saw her classmates did not finish the meal。
写作思路：首先点题，简述以往民以食为天到现在人们忘记食物的本来意义，通过叙述过节，表妹浪费粮食，大人们的态度，以及自己的感受，说明要节约粮食。正文。
Xinhua" is indispensable to our life's energy, if there is no electricity, the factory will not be able to operate the machine, replication can not be lighting, children can not see the TV channels。
因此,我们必须节约。新技术的开发和应用,降低能源成本在工业和日常生活。替代能源应尽可能采用。消除浪费能源的做法。人类在历史上克服了许多危机,我们一定会赢。
3. 听力语法词汇阅读达到扣分2分以内
4. 为高中四大题型打基础（翻译与概要写作、语法填空，词汇填空和完形填空）
in our daily life we should turn off the tap when we finish using water. Don't have the water running when we wash face or brush teeth. Besides ,we should make proper use of paper。
提示：
Until recently, we have started to acknowledge that we should make the bigger efforts to save water. Therefore, so save water from every single person is important。
（1）上海中考听说测试2023年开始将从目前的10分增加到15-20分，节约英语作文题目，用来筛选学生的意图更明显。
（2）上海初中英语从2023年开始将改版，目前用了将近20年的牛津教材将成为历史，而高中教材已于2020年率先改版，对学生的能力要求更上一个台阶。
写作思路：根据题目要求，围绕勤俭节约展开描写，接着表达自己的感受。Electricity plays a very important role in our life today. We can't live without it.电在我们今天的生活中起着非常重要的作用，我们不能没有它。
今天开始发几位基础薄弱初三学生的作文修改（坐标：杨浦区内最底层的学校之一，定位：100-110）
描写思路：可以从为何要节约粮食作为主题，描述节约粮食的重要性，最后总结节约粮食的可行方法，正文：When it comes to food, you will definitely think of delicious rice and delicious steamed bread。
只有同辈作文，节约的重要性英语作文带翻译，才能深有感触；只有对比原文和我的修改稿，才能懂得写作之道。请珍惜最最最干货！
范文一：如何节约用水英语作文 Water has no colourno shapesno taste and no smell.Water is every where.It's in the oceanin the seain the river and in the late.Water is useful。
Thrifty is still a virtue
修改前：
In the past，China was not a rich country. Our seniours lived a simple life. They worked hard and saved a lot. Nowadays，we have become rich. We don’t need to worried about food or clothes. Should we continue saving? Yes. The food we eat and the things we use are the fruits of other people’s labor. Saving is a important way to show your respect to labourers. A good life is not easy to come. It comes from every labourers’ hard working. So，saving is Thrifty Virtue. It’s the task for everyone.
People often say,“Time is money." But in fact time is more valuable than money.The time we have is limited,Every second is precious. we should make full use of our time。
修改后：
Being thrifty is still a virtue（节俭是美德）. China used to be a poor country and people used to live a simple life. Senior citizens worked hard and saved a lot in many ways. Nowadays，关于节约的英语作文80词，we have become richer. We don’t need to be worried about a lack of (缺乏，不足）food or clothes. Should we continue that good virtue of being thrifty? Definitely!
The food we eat and the things we use are the fruits of other people’s labor. Not wasting them is an important way to show your respect to the labourers. Besides，with the development of our country，people cunsume(消耗）more and more natural resources. (自然资源） If we are not careful about using them，以节约为主题的英语作文，we will be in trouble in the near future.
A wonderful life does not come easily. It comes from every labourers’ hard work and the resources on the earth. So，节约资源的英语作文80词，being thrifty is still a virtue. We should cherish what we have now.
