爱吃辣的加拿大大叔雅思托福10多年一线教学中文说得还不错，头像是他家猫在这里分享他原创的雅思写作干货每篇范文都有配音，在同名公众号“英语考试Cat”
你好呀，我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。今天，给大家带来雅思大作文真题(2022年7月16日真题)的范文。
老规矩，以下是正文目录：
1，题目
2，6分版本
3，Mac修改
4，8分范文
5，范文地道词汇中英对照，包括：
题目改述
高分句型
展示“词汇丰富度”的词汇&短语
展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇&句型
雅思写作小作文图表类写作句型 想要小作文写得好，客观准确的表达方式是必不可少的，下面我就给大家带来小作文图表类的精选句型，希望能够帮助到您!1。
上题：
Some people think that the Olympic Games is an exciting event and can bring nations together. Others，however，think that it is a waste of money. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
6分版本：
Some believe that the Olympic Games is an event that connects countries; whereas many also state that it is a waste of tax revenue. This essay shall explore both views; however，in my opinion，I think the Olympics are beneficial for humanity.
The overarching reason for people believing that the Olympics，especially the Summer Olympics，brings nations together，is that it is the most important sports event worldwide and the only global occasion，that truly motivates citizens from all nations. Being an event with thousands of years of history，it has always been celebrated as a way for nations and peoples to set aside their cultural，political，and religious differences in deference to a higher calling of athletic spirit. Especially in today’s world，where the Internet serves as a ubiquitous mediumS for citizens to communicate，the Olympics has even a greater influence on allowing people from all over the world to instantly engage with each other. This universality of sports bridges cultures and peoples across borders，thus uniting worldwide groups.
一、总结段可有可无，可加主观观点 结尾段建议考生为求文章结构板块的完整性起到首尾呼应的作用，用1到2句话重申图表突出特征然后总结图表反映的现象揭示其规律和本质，切忌添加主观观点!图表没有反映的信息绝对不写。
This，however，is exactly why some feel that the Olympics，雅思小作文范文150字，is a waste of taxpayers' money. Being a grand event that demands state-of-the-art facilities，the host country，especially developing ones，takes years to plan and build stadiums and other facilities to accommodate the event and all the staff. Subsequently，a big chunk of tax money，as well as other resources，are sucked into this project throughout the period，and these sports facilities，in a lot of cases，will sit idle after the games。
In conclusion，it is clear that financially，for countries，雅思小作文一般出什么，the Olympics can serve as a burden; however，there is also no doubt that this is the only global-level event，in the average person’s eyes，that truly enables people from all over the world to interact with each other(，) while promoting the host country，sowing seeds for its tourism industry，which in return，will bring revenue back to the country.
Mac批改：
清理掉批改的版本：
Some believe that the Olympic Games is a stimulating event that can help increase the bonds between countries; however，many state that it is simply an extravagant waste of tax revenue. This essay shall explore both views，along with my opinion that the Olympics are beneficial for humanity despite the cost.
The overarching reason for people believing that the Olympics brings nations together is that it is the only global event，雅思小作文写三段，besides the ‘World Cup’，that truly motivates citizens from all nations to come together. Being an event with thousands of years of history，it has always been celebrated as a way for nations and peoples to set aside their cultural，political，and religious differences in deference to a higher calling of athletic spirit. Especially in today’s world，where television and the Internet serve as ubiquitous mediums for citizens to receive information and to communicate，the Olympics has the capability to bridge cultures and peoples across borders，雅思小作文范文，thus helping to unite the world.
The Olympics，however，is considered by some to be a waste of taxpayers' money，雅思小作文写一面够吗，since in order to host the event，it demands state-of-the-art facilities，a fact that may do more harm than good to the host country，especially developing nations. Since the prestige that such an event can foster is tantalizingly tempting for governments，many nations are willing to undertake the many years it can take to plan and build stadiums and other facilities to accommodate the event. Subsequently，a big chunk of tax money as well as other resources are sucked into this project throughout the building of sports facilities，雅思原创作文，which in many cases will sit idle after the games，whilst at the same time，will take years for the debt that was incurred to be repaid.
4. 表很小幅度：slight (slightly)5. 表大约：about / around/ approximately 6. 分别： respectively 经过了上面的整理，同学们看完后是否就没那么恐惧了呢？小作文写作真的不像大家想象得那么难。
In conclusion，it is clear that financially the Olympics can serve as a burden for many less well-off nations; however，in my opinion，there is no doubt that this is the only global-level event that truly enables people from all over the world to interact with each other，while simultaneously promoting the host country.
- Essay Analysis 范文解析 -
- (1) Introduction
Some believe that the Olympic Games is a stimulating event that can help increase the bonds between countries; however，many state that it is simply an extravagant waste of tax revenue. This essay shall explore both views，along with my opinion that the Olympics are beneficial for humanity despite the cost.
Paraphrasing from the Statement/Question 题目改述:
some people think that = some believe that
exciting = stimulating
bring...together = increase the bonds between
others think that = many state that
money = tax revenue
Standard Phrase for the “Discuss + Opinion” type essay “讨论+观点”类大作文高分句型：
some believe that
This essay shall explore both views，雅思小作文swift，along with my opinion that
Words showing Cohesion (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语:
把小作文的基本写作思路分析透彻之后，做好分段，接下来只需要熟背一些替换单词，变换一下语法形式(如非谓语动词的使用)，那么小作文将不在是很多烤鸭们的障碍。雅思写作中的组合句子运用技巧解读1。
that
however
it is
despite
Vocabulary 高分地道词汇和短语：
stimulating 振奋人心的
bond 纽带
an extravagant waste of 极度铺张浪费的
humanity 人类
- (2) Body 1 -
The overarching reason for people believing that the Olympics brings nations together is that it is the only global event，besides the ‘World Cup’，雅思满分小作文范文30篇，that truly motivates citizens from all nations to come together. Being an event with thousands of years of history，it has always been celebrated as a way for nations and peoples to set aside their cultural，political，and religious differences in deference to a higher calling of athletic spirit. Especially in today’s world，where television and the Internet serve as ubiquitous mediums for citizens to receive information and to communicate，the Olympics has the capability to bridge cultures and peoples across borders，thus helping to unite the world.
Standard IELTS essay phrase 雅思高频句型：
the overarching reason for...is that ……的重要原因
Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道词汇和短语：
motivate 鼓励
雅思小作文的解题步骤 步骤一：雅思写作审题，找出题目的要求，从而完成评分描述“Task Achievement” 第 一 条 the requirements of the task (<2分钟) 具体来看：阅读文字部分shows后面信息，找出题目的topic。
set aside 把……搁置到一边
in deference to 遵从
higher calling 更崇高的使命/更高的目标
athletic spirit 运动精神
ubiquitous mediums 普遍的媒介
to bridge 架起桥梁
Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words，conjunctions，relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：
it
besides
especially
where
thus
- (3) Body 2 -
雅思小作文字数要求：不少于150字，大作文不少于250个字。虽然没有上限之说，但雅思写作并不是字数越多越好，建议控制在以下范围：雅思小作文 150-170字 雅思大作文 250-
The Olympics，however，is considered by some to be a waste of taxpayers' money，since in order to host the event，it demands state-of-the-art facilities，a fact that may do more harm than good to the host country，especially developing nations. Since the prestige that such an event can foster is tantalizingly tempting for governments，many nations are willing to undertake the many years it can take to plan and build stadiums and other facilities to accommodate the event. Subsequently，a big chunk of tax money as well as other resources are sucked into this project throughout the building of sports facilities，which in many cases will sit idle after the games，whilst at the same time，will take years for the debt that was incurred to be repaid.
Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道词汇和短语：
state-of-the-art 高水准的
the host country 东道主
prestige 声望
foster 促进；培养
tantalizing 撩人的；振奋人心的
tempting 诱人的；吸引人的
undertake 承担；担任
accommodate 提供；举办
a big chunk of 很大一部分
idle 闲置的
incur 引起；造成
越南雅思考试写作的卷子难度和大陆雅思一致，但是有几点明显优势：1、亚太区的卷子在题库轮换中比大陆有规律，目前还不是太有反预测的情况，所以从预测的角度来说越南雅思考试更好猜题。考试提前一点了解提醒题型和复习方向。
Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words，conjunctions，relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：
however。
since
in order to
that
especially
such
subsequently
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this
which
in many cases
whilst
1. 雅思小作文开头 图表类型：table; chart; diagram; graph; column chart; pie graph 描述：show; describe; illustrate; can be seen from; clear; apparent; reveal; represent 内容。
at the same time
- (4) Conclusion -
1、单图题(一个图的小作文小心字数不够，用长点的句子，描述要完善)：线图：主题段就写一段，尽量详细把每个点都标清楚，拐点，极点，小趋势，总趋势可以比较后总结。饼图：主题段开始表述由哪几个部分组成。
In conclusion，it is clear that financially the Olympics can serve as a burden for many less well-off nations; however，in my opinion，there is no doubt that this is the only global-level event that truly enables people from all over the world to interact with each other，while simultaneously promoting the host country.
Standard IELTS essay phrase 雅思高频句型：
In conclusion，it is clear that
however，in my opinion，there is no doubt that
Vocabulary and Collocations 高分地道词汇和短语：
less well-off 没那么富裕的
global-level 全球层面的
Words Showing Cohesion [Signposting words，conjunctions，relative pronouns] (C&C) 展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇和短语：
while
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